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Mar. 4th, 2012 | 03:04 am

Title : Smooth Criminal (S.C)
Author: [info]tensaibaka
Beta-reader : chibieminachan
Pairing : Sakuraiba, Sakumiya 
Genre: Comedy, Romance, a little angst
Rating: NC-17
Summary : Sho was given some work to do. And yet, he had never expected that it's gonna be an easy one and a tough one at the same time. Who was he? How naive can he get?
A/N : 3868words. Title was inspired by AnShi MJ performance by Sakumiya. Been a while since i updated one.
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[When night falls, when the moon’s out. When dogs start barking for no reason, and when dark clouds gather together. You know you shouldn’t be out here. Should you be out, you are in big danger. ]

Driving his car on the dark streets, he was on his way to meet his target. All dressed in white, with only a blue shirt inside, ‘cause he knew his target wouldn’t be able to withstand this ‘pureness’. Even the man beside him couldn’t hold his own hunger.

“I love how you look right now…” he giggled while playing his white tie with those chubby fingers.

“Aren’t you wearing the same as me, Nino? And get your fat paws off me.”

“You’ve never made any wrong choices when selecting our uniform.” Nino set the tie properly before sitting back. “You have never looked so good in white! Even I can’t resist, Sho!”

Sho laughed, and wasn’t sure if Nino meant it. He wanted to trust him, but he’d usually fall for this little prankster’s jokes. His schemes were the only reason why they seldom fail their missions. And even if they failed, that tongue of his always won against the clients.

“You know what this means?”

Sho was completely focused on driving.

“Tonight. After this case. You and me. Back home. Sex.” As usual, his straightforwardness was always what Sho loved about him.

He stopped his car at the back door of a club, and looked at Nino. “Sure! Why not? You owe me one from last time…” Sho leaned forwards to Nino for his “pre-show” kiss before getting out of the car. As he got out, Nino lowered the window, holding an earpiece.

“I’ll be listening and recording now.”

“See ya. By the way, that was the preview for later.” He winked before going into the club through the back door.

Inside the club, you couldn’t see anything even though the lights were shining everywhere. But to Sho, it was nothing to be afraid of, clubbing was his hobby. He was sure that he would be able to find him. And speak of the devil, from afar he could see his figure, sitting in front of the bar counter and drinking with a straw. Sho squeezed his way to the counter effortlessly and managed to get a seat beside him, the man who was well-dressed in black pants and shirt with sleeves rolled up to his elbows, or in short, his target.

He waved his hand a little and ordered a glass of Brandy. He knew that the eyes of his target were stealing glances at his body. He too, actually, couldn’t stop looking at him. The man was far from what he expected.

Their eyes met for the first time. The man’s face turned red quickly, and he immediately averted his eyes. At the same time, Sho felt a tiny thump in his heart. “It must be the loud music,” he thought as he smiled at the man who was sucking his straw as if he was dying of thirst.

“Hi, nice to meet you.” Sho looked at him hard to make sure he could not escape from the conversation. The lanky man was so surprised that he ended up having a coughing fit.

A good chance to get close. Sho patted his back gently and lightly asked, “You okay?”

“Yes. I’m fine, thank you.” He must have felt uncomfortable. “Nice... nice to meet you…”

“What’s your name?” He purposely asked softly, so that man had no choice but to bring his body near him.

“Sorry, but I can’t hear you.”

“What’s your name?” Sho said it again, this time a little louder.

“My name? I’m Aiba Masaki.” He bowed politely, and that was unexpected too. “What is your name then?”

“My name?” Sho hesitated. But he thought that it might be the last time he’d get to see this man. “Sakurai Sho.”

“Sakurai Sho. Your name is nice…”

“Thank you. Your name ain’t too bad either.” Sho smiled, at him.

“No…Actually I don’t really like it...” Aiba bit his lips, and Sho couldn’t resist imagining how they would taste against his own. “It sounds a little girlish.”

“Well, I like it.” Aiba perked up.

“Really? You’re the second person that’s said that to me. The first one was my boyfriend!”

“Boyfriend?” Sho acted like he was surprised. The truth was that he already knew all this from his client, or Aiba’s so-called “boyfriend”. What a sad man, Sho thought, Being betrayed by his ‘boyfriend’. And he had no clue about it whatsoever. Sho could only feel pity for the man because of what he would do to him later.

“Ohh… I shouldn’t have said that…” Aiba lowered his head this time.

“This is a free world. You are free to love anyone.” Sho wanted to add “and have sex with anyone” in too, but it would be too rated for Aiba, who seemed like the ‘one-look-and-you-know-he-is-innocent' guy.

Aiba probably had never met someone who would accept this kind of relationship before. He started to become a little more talkative about his life, his work and how he met his boyfriend from their first meeting to where he was now, stranded in this wild place by himself.

“I’m quite surprised.” This time Sho was honestly astonished. “This is your first time in a club?”

“Yeah, I actually don’t like these places. And I usually don't stay up this late either… However, my boyfriend wanted me to try experiencing some of the nightlife so he invited me here. But he was caught up with work, so now I’m here alone.”

Sho smirked, “You sure he’s busy with work?”

“He’d never lie to me.”

Boy, Sho wholeheartedly pitied him. His boyfriend had planned all this from the start. Even dressing in white was part of his plan too. His heart felt an unexplainable sting and bitterness. Aiba was just like how his boyfriend had described - a naïve man who couldn’t tell apart the lies from the truth.

“Haven’t you heard? When night falls, when the moon’s out. When dogs starts barking for no reason, and when dark clouds gather together. You know you shouldn’t be out here. Should you be out, you are in big danger.”

“Really?” Aiba took a large gulp of his beer. Their eyes met for the second time, and Sho knew this wouldn’t be the last. A sudden gush of heat went around his body. He never had felt something like that before. Or maybe he had once - whilst having sex with Nino.

Was it his face, or the way he talked? Or was it how he looked and dressed? Sho had never felt so attracted to any of his targets before. This was the first time Sho had felt such a strong draw to someone.

“What’s wrong, Sakurai-san?” Aiba’s voice suddenly turned soft and gentle. Did he always use this voice to seduce that worthless boyfriend? Nah, he wouldn’t need to do that, ‘cause his body was already seductive as hell. Sho thought his eyes were playing tricks on him. Aiba had a slim waist, which led Sho to wonder if his ‘boyfriend’ had ever fed him before. His fingers were long and his nails were cut neatly, unlike the paws from his partner just now.

His face was incomparable with others. And that big smile he used when he was talking about his boyfriend. That was something he adored about Aiba. Sho would never be able to beat a smile like that. Aiba was special; he knew that when he met him just an hour ago. Now he didn’t feel pity for Aiba, but for his boyfriend. He sure had missed out so many good things about this man. Sho wondered why would that ‘boyfriend’ would choose his wife, who loved to verbally abuse him, over someone who was a total sweetie pie, never harsh, not easily hurt, beautiful and kind.

Sho cleared his throat and looked at his watch. “I’m fine. Aiba, this place is so noisy, why don’t we go somewhere that is more peaceful?”

“Alright then! Lead the way!” Aiba took one last slip before shakily standing up.

That was Aiba’s 7th drink that night, and it was the perfect time for Sho to execute the plan.


Before they even reached the hotel room, Aiba had his legs wrapped around Sho’s waist and their mouths were glued together. It really was a miracle that Sho could find their room with all the crazy kissing and grinding going on. They went inside and closed the door with a loud bang. Sho pushed Aiba against the door and smirked at him.

“Baby, do you really want it? I might hurt you, you know.” The word ‘hurt’ here referred to 2 things, his heart and ass.

Aiba just replied with a kiss.

Nothing could stop him now. He lifted Aiba effortlessly, and threw him onto the bed. Aiba let out a soft ‘ah’. His dick twitched. It was now completely hard, all thanks to Aiba, that exceptionally seductive man. The sweat Aiba had produced was trickling down his forehead. His shirt was half-unbuttoned, almost exposing his belly. His chest was heaving up and down, and he was puffing out small breaths. His face was unbelievably flustered and he looked so fuckable and uke-lious. Sho wondered if his boyfriend had seen him like this.

“I haven’t been a uke for a month.”

Tempting, and at the same time funny. “You guys take turns to fuck each other?” Sho threw his white coat away, working on his tie and shirt buttons before getting on top of Aiba.

“It’s called making love. And yes, we do take turns to make love with—"

Sho covered his mouth. “So are we considered to be making love too?”

After removing his hand, he swiftly landed his lips on Aiba’s and started the furious tongue battle. He held onto Aiba’s head and shifted it a little to get further in.

“Mmm… Mmmm.”

Aiba was making all those delicious moans, and Sho wasn’t doing too bad himself. That big thing of his was getting bigger and harder. The way he got so easily turned on by some stranger he’d just met was unbelievable. No doubt he had a fetish over ‘weak’ guys like him. Someone who could get broken easily, yet still retained some kick-ass attitude.

“Boy, can you get this shirt off your body?” Sho muttered with his lips still plastered on Aiba’s face. Aiba pushed Sho away ever so slightly,

“Not ‘boy’, but Masaki…”

He sat up. Slowly and delicately, he concentrated on unbuttoning the rest of the buttons on his shirt, peeling the material off his skin. The unbearable pain was growing around Sho’s crotch. The scene in front of him was pure madness. He wanted to taint Aiba with all the darkness he had.

He raised Aiba’s head, and smiled at him. “Lovely… Masaki. How about your pants now?” “Why not yours? Aren’t you suffering from my strip tease?” Aiba retorted with a smirk.

Woah, how dare he truant the mighty sex god, Sakurai Sho! Never expected him to say something like that. He must be a closet brat.

“No darling, we leave the best ‘till last…”

He pushed Aiba back onto the bed. His hands were around his crotch and pulling the zip down. Aiba let out a moan, and Sho felt the bulge in his pants grow. His fingers grabbed at the waistband of Aiba’s pants, and together with his boxers, Sho pulled them down fast and Aiba gasped loudly. Immediately, his long length stood up, attracting both their attention.

Sweetness. It’d been awhile since Sho felt so excited. He took the length and stroked it. Aiba grunted, his head leaning back. Sho took it that Aiba was enjoying the touch. He proceeded with taking it to a whole new level, his mouth. The moment when it entered, Aiba groaned from the warmness he felt around it.

“Sa...Saku…rai” he moaned.

Ignoring him, Sho sucked at the tip and spread his legs apart with his hands. He eyed Aiba, who was looking at him and biting his lips. Sho then licked every inch of skin before bringing it deeper which caused Aiba to jerk his body. He started moving up and down, taking the length in and out of his mouth. Aiba gripped the bed sheet even harder, until it was wrapped around his hands.

Cuteness overloaded. The more Aiba reacted to Sho’s actions, the more Sho wanted to do it rougher.

He pressed his thumb against his entrance and Aiba gasped again. His body tensed up when Sho rubbed it.

“Oh…god…I’m... I’m...”

The length inside Sho’s mouth was beginning to stick up and pre-cum was dripping off it already. There was no doubt he was going to come soon. He sped up his mouth and pushed his thumb inside Aiba ever so slightly. It wasn’t even half way in and Aiba had already spilt his fresh milk in Sho’s mouth.

“Oh goodness…” was the first sentence Aiba said as he gasped for more air.

Sho smirked as he swallowed all of his cum. He moved back up to Aiba’s lips and started kissing him again. This time he made sure Aiba tasted the mixture of his saliva and his own cum.

“Hmm…” Aiba broke the kiss. “It tastes so weird…”

“Your own liquid?”

Aiba blushed. “Do you think I’ve ever tasted it before?”

Sho smiled, “Doesn’t your boyfriend ever kiss you after a blowjob?” He then kissed his forehead tenderly. “No, he spits it out immediately.”

“Wuss…”

Sho got off Aiba, and signalled for him to look. He started unbuckling his belt before pulling it out. Sho grabbed Aiba’s hands and used them to trace around his chest and his abs.

“Wait…”

“Didn’t you want to touch it?” Sho questioned.

Aiba hesitated but gave in willingly. He moved his hands down, dangerously close to his crotch. Aiba was looking at it intensely. Taking this perfect chance, Sho took Aiba’s hands and tied them up with his belt.

Aiba panicked, “What are you doing?”

“Making love with you…” He licked his lips and undid the fly on his pants.

He quickly pulled down his pants in front of Aiba, showing off his manhood to him. Aiba stared at the scene with his face and ears a bright red in color. He flipped Aiba on all fours and wetted his fingers. Without letting Aiba argue otherwise, he swiftly pushed his fingers inside him.

Aiba groaned in pain, and yet Sho continued pushing them in and out.

“Masaki, I’m preparing you for later…”

Aiba gave a light nod with a soft “nn” and, Sho felt his dick twitch again. Once Sho thought that Aiba was ready, he replaced his fingers with his dick. Aiba screamed when he felt the erect member go in.

“No…no… more..!”

“I’m only half-way in, Masaki…” Aiba bit his lips.

“You’re... too big... can’t fit…in.”

God, that sentence was total turn on for Sho. “Going deeper~” he chuckled as he pushed himself further in. Aiba fidgeted around when Sho started moving. Sho soon got irritated by Aiba’s movements and grabbed his hands and pinned them to the wall, slowly grinding his hips down onto the bed. Aiba leaned against Sho’s body as Sho started pounding him. From where Sho was, he was in direct view of Aiba’s nape. He took a good whiff of it and, god, it smelt sweet. Another thing he hadn’t expected. Nino’s scent was kinda bitter and dirty, but Aiba’s was sweet and flowery.

“Saku... Sakurai…”

It looked like Sho had found his sweet spot. He continued to rock in and out, making sure to hit it each time. Aiba moaned like crazy. His breaths were getting louder and more rugged. Sho was beginning to find it harder to breathe as well, his breaths becoming unsteady.

He then removed himself from Aiba and sat on the bed with his legs spread wide. He waved at Aiba with his finger and beckoned him sit on his lap. With his bounded hands, Aiba only could place them on Sho’s chest as he watched himself push slowly down on Sho. And when it was all in, he looked back at Sho and smiled.

“It’s... all in.”

Another turn on phrase by “Master” Aiba Masaki. How can he not get excited?

Sho grabbed his waist and started thrusting at his desired speed. Aiba began wailing and tears were brimming in his eyes. “Masaki...” Sho kept chanting his name. He felt he was getting closer and closer, almost ready to spill his seed into Aiba.

Moans echoed across the room, both men focussing only on each other’s eyes. They kissed one last time before Sho spurted inside Aiba. And with a few strokes to Aiba’s length, he came for the second time that night. Their bodies were dirtied with Aiba’s cum and when they realized that, they both laughed and shared another warm kiss before withdrawing from each other.

They waited until their breath became steady again and their chests weren’t heaving as much. Sho slid beside Aiba and took the blanket - that Aiba had kicked off earlier - and pulled it up to cover both their bodies. He then patted Aiba’s head lightly.

“You need some sleep…”

“What about you?” Aiba yawned. His eyelids were becoming heavy.

Sho faked a yawn. “I guess I do too…”

He closed his eyes and waited a good 5 minutes before opening them again. Aiba was already fast asleep, and though Sho knew he needed to go, he didn't feel like leaving Aiba. But he had someone waiting for him downstairs and he had to get all those pictures and the video to his client tomorrow.

Damn, he cursed in his heart as he gathered all his clothes and dressed fast. He went the wardrobe and took the camera inside. And then to the small plant that was a few steps away from the bed, and dug for another small camera. From both these positions, he could see Aiba clearly. Right now, he was sleeping peacefully, and it kinda hurt Sho to know that his boyfriend would confront him tomorrow about what they’d just done. He walked to the bed and to Aiba. He leaned down towards his face and gave him a light kiss on the forehead.

“We’ll never see each other again…” He whispered. “Thanks for this…”

He then moved to the door and took one last glance at Aiba before leaving the room. He sighed as he took a small device out of his pocket.

“Nino, I’m coming down now.”

When he came down, Nino was already waiting for him at the entrance. He took the driver seat and looked at his partner who was seemed to be delighted.

“That was a great one…” Nino licked his lips. Sho started up the car and then pushed it into gear. “A great job?”

Nino placed his hands on Sho’s chest and traced around it with his fingers. “Yeah, I’m so hard right now… “

Sho took his hands and kissed them softly before pulling Nino in for a quick, but hot, kiss. “Let’s go home and see what we can do about your problem.”

He pushed down hard on the pedal and the car sped away.

“To be honest, that Aiba Masaki was quite dumb. He should’ve sensed that his boyfriend was married, right? Or at least sensed that his boyfriend wanted to break up with him, right?”

Sho didn’t reply.

“And is he really that naïve? He looked like an ordinary gay to me…”

“Nino, stop it…” Sho’s voice turned a little cold. “Let’s just get home quickly.”

“Alright…”

~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x~x

A few weeks later

A normal morning and Sho had just finished his latest job. He had been working on the case from yesterday night till now and he was dead tired. Nino was already downstairs and Sho still had some energy to burn. Taking his coat, he went out of his office and the two of them strolled to the nearest coffee shop.

Sho was wearing those ‘pure’ white pants and the matching coat again. Nino said he loved Sho in white and would work harder if he wore those. And Sho wore them, for the sake of his partner.

He stretched his arms as he walked down the streets. While walking lazily, from afar, he thought he saw someone familiar. He couldn’t really recall who it was and didn’t bother to try to remember. Yet when they passed each other and made eye contact, the man stopped in his tracks and dropped his coffee. He ran back to Sho and grabbed him by his collar.

“YOU!!” Sho was surprised too. The man that had looked so familiar was none other than one of his client’s boyfriends, or in short, the man who had given him the best sex ever. But he still couldn’t remember anything else aside from the fact his name was Masaki.

“My boyfriend broke up with me and it’s all because of you! Damn you, I’ve been trying to find you!” Masaki wailed as his eyes began to fill up with tears.

“Hey, chill man!” Sho tried to calm him down since they were attracting too much attention from people who were passing by.

“Chill?! How can I?! How…can… I..?” His tears rolled freely down from his eyes. “I loved him…really…”

Sho clicked his tongue. He knew he would get hurt, so he had even asked him if he was willing to do it before they’d started. But Masaki must have forgotten that. Which meant he didn’t remember the sex! “Damn it!” With Sho already exhausted and now Masaki with this situation, he got pissed.

“Hey…” Sho motioned at the name tag. “Aiba-san, let’s get this clear. Your boyfriend paid me to do this. He’s the real bastard!” He shoved Aiba’s hands away.

“Huh?”

He then took a business card out from his coat pocket and passed it to Aiba. “Here is my business card. We specialize in lots of things. And I have to go now…. Oh!” Sho pointed at the coffee that was all over the ground. “I owe you this one…” He then ran back to the office.

Aiba stared at the name card. He couldn’t believe what had just happened. But even so, doing that kind of stuff was not right. Hatred grew in his heart. He wanted to stop and destroy them. An impulsive thought ran through his mind. He swiftly took his phone out and dialled a number.

“Hi, it’s me. Oh-chan, I need your help… I want to create a company… Yup, not kidding… Come to my house tonight… I will tell you more... Okay… See ya.”

He took the final look at the name card and then crushed it in his hand.

“Smooth Criminal (S.C.) special agency, specialized on such things…Calling yourselves smooth criminals... I’ll make sure I destroy you before you destroy more lives!” He cursed as he shoved the small piece of paper into his pocket.

“And Sakurai Sho, I will personally make sure that you are doomed.”


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A/N : HIHI!!!!!!!!!! It's been a while since i update a fic!and a NC one!! OMG! Getting so excited for nothing!
Will edit some of the grammar and vocab tml, or if possible, if anyone wants to beta this fic, it would be great! just pm me or comment here!

By the way, this will determine if i should start writing a series or not! Well, i will see if it's possible for this to happen in this fic :D

THANKS! HOPE YOU ENJOY IT~!


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Hideko Ikuta

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from: hideko_ikuta
date: Mar. 3rd, 2012 07:41 pm (UTC)
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Wooohooooo... This is so hot..!

Hope you will continue this story, so I can see more of SakurAiba rabu. Fufufu..

Thanks for sharing.

Great job! b(^_^)d

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 02:43 pm (UTC)
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thank you so much! Hope you enjoy this fic!

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mocorin

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from: m1u_12
date: Mar. 3rd, 2012 07:57 pm (UTC)
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ohmy!! that was super HOT xD
this one needs continuation.
it's been a long time since your last update. i really missed your works **
so i hope you will write more.. :)
thanks for this one!

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 02:50 pm (UTC)
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Thanks! It's been a while since i wrote a NC fic! feeling doki doki now~ haha!

Again, thanks for reading and hope you enjoy it!

Just hope i can gather more info before i can start on the sequel! :D

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cherry1989

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from: cherry1989
date: Mar. 3rd, 2012 08:56 pm (UTC)
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I sincerely hope you will continue this into a series!
Whoa, I can totally imagine Aiba as naive and also a bit stupid boy who can also be very vengeful. I actually want to read this kind of Aiba since he is never portrayed like that... And Sho in this fic... Is fabulously unmoral... Okay, what I'm trying to say here is that I liked this and I really would love to read more :)

Thanks for writing and sharing <3

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:11 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much for reading! Hopefully to gather some idea for the sequel.

There's really a lack of sakuraiba love in LJ! Just hope this can make the love grow back again!

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arashitv

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from: arashitv
date: Mar. 3rd, 2012 09:03 pm (UTC)
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This fic is great and hot!
I like the story, it's very interested
Nino and Sho are bad boy and Aiba is so naive and I want to see what will he do with Ohno for his revenge!
I hope you will continue this fic ^^

Thank you for posting ^^

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:16 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much! it's been a while since i wrote! hope you enjoy this!

And also aiba's navie-ness !

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ayudarsini

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from: adeyakana
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 12:12 am (UTC)
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this is so hot *o*
it's been long time you write and you're back with Sakuraiba
love it
thank you for sharing

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:17 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much! It's really been a while since i wrote.

Hope you enjoy it like before too!

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Nhess

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from: luvin_arashi
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:12 am (UTC)
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i miss your fics! hihi...
and i love this! i definitely want a series for this! ;)

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:19 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much! i miss writing too, especially sakuraiba~

Hope you enjoy it!

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darkiller

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from: coolohoh
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:47 am (UTC)
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wah! love it... and the ending... its more like an invitation for a part 2 than an ending to me ;)

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:28 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much! hope you enjoy reading this! And yes, the end is owning for a part 2! HAHA! THANKS!

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Ryana [ リヤナ ]

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from: daikishlicious
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:59 am (UTC)
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It's a oneshot? Can you continue it please? :D I wanna see how Aiba gonna destroy Sho. XD

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:32 pm (UTC)
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this fic is a oneshot. I'm still trying to plot for the fic(if possible) XD

Thank you so much for reading!

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syayamea

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from: syayamea
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 05:05 am (UTC)
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u seriously need to continue this ficXDDDD
that was totally hot*__*
& i've been wanting someone to post a fic bout sho in that smooth criminal outfit~~he looks so hot in that~~
anyway..thank u sooo much for writing & sharing this..like i said..u need to continue this~~~

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:35 pm (UTC)
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Haha! i feel so bad now leaving a cliffhanger there!

Same thoughts too! I tho someone would wrote it, and i was surprised that no one did(or maybe they did but i didn't realised) So decided to do it myself.

Thank you for reading! hope you enjoy it!

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lolex90

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from: lolex90
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 06:06 am (UTC)
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Wow,,THAT WAS HOT!!
I kind miss your fanfic ^^. Welcome back!!

can't wait what will Aiba do to Sho.. :)

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:37 pm (UTC)
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thank you so much! And yup, back again before disappearing again T.T (had internship for this semester)

Hope you enjoy it, and hope that i could give this a better end! :D

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RAN

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from: aiba_manami
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 06:35 am (UTC)
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Seriously, I need the sequel ╭(๑¯⌓¯๑)╮
Love your fic ♥ O(≧∇≦)O
Thanks for sharing

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:38 pm (UTC)
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Haha! Thank you so much for reading! The emoji are so cute!!

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so_gracefull

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from: so_gracefull
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 07:32 am (UTC)
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Ooooohhh... That was hot! *__* but I still want more... Please continue this even just a sequel so that Sakuraiba will have a happy ending. And it's quite obvious that Sho actually liked Masaki. I'd love to know how Masaki will take his revenge on Sho (and eventually love him) ^_^

welcome back bb~ It's been a while since your last update

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:40 pm (UTC)
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thank you so much! back for some actions before going to hibernate for more ideas! :P

and yup, he is showing some interest on aiba~ wonder what will happen too~ haha!

Thanks for reading!

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janinebr

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from: janinebr
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 11:20 am (UTC)
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this is really good^^ and it goes on, ne^^ love it :-) really hot and nice story beside the hottness^^

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 03:41 pm (UTC)
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Thank you so much!

Hope you enjoy reading it!

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NatsuRin

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from: natsurin
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 04:33 pm (UTC)
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Woah!!!! Dint expect it to be a series! Omg. Sweet!!!! I tot they will fall in love but this development is even better!!!! Hahahahhax

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 5th, 2012 03:50 pm (UTC)
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haha! thank you! have to gather more ideas before starting too~

Hope you enjoy it!

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andreja1989

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from: andreja1989
date: Mar. 4th, 2012 05:18 pm (UTC)
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it has been some time since you posted a fic, right? and I'm glad and happy you posted this one ^^ it's mecha mecha hot and interesting ^^ somehow Aiba's last statements call for a sequel ^^ kidding but would be interesting xD
thanks for writing and sharing :3

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Chie

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from: tensaibaka
date: Mar. 5th, 2012 03:52 pm (UTC)
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Haha! thank you so much! Hope that i have enough idea to start writing again!

Thanks! hope you enjoy it!

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